Free Fall
By Catherine Mann
Release Date: March 5, 2013
*Ebook Review Available from WV Reads*
2
Stars! - This military romance novel has more detail on the military
than the romance. First chapter starts out with action but that fades
too soon. There are flashbacks, exotic settings, and a thread of
mystery. I was new to the author and series. While I wasn’t lost I don’t
see myself picking up another.
New to
Catherine Mann, I was intrigued by the African Adventure aspect of the
plot. She’s usually recommended for fans of Lori Foster and Suzanne
Brockman but I didn’t enjoy her style as much. The story is mostly told
through inner monologue of the hero and heroine in a rough third person
viewpoint. I say rough because of some unusual perceptions and word
choices. The hero Jose “Cuervo” doesn’t have much personality. He’s a
reformed alcoholic pining over his lost love, our heroine. Stella is
more fun, sassy and smart and slightly less introspective. However, it’s
incredibly unsatisfying to read them thinking about how they love each
other but can’t ever be together while side by side. Not all was lost
though, fast paced and twisty, it can be a quick adrenaline rush read.
The
suspense angle after the first 20% or so feels manufactured in a bad
way. Jose wonders what Stella was forced to endure while captured.
Stella refuses to say for a long time. Their company in the deserted
African plains is his teammate Bubbles and college boy Sutton. I think
they were supposed to offer some rapport and comedic relief but they
fall flat. Suddenly, characters start popping out of the wood work.
Other possible couples appear. But if you like a romance with a lot
going on other than the star couple, this is a good choice. But if you
prefer more of heartfelt or steamy romance with your suspense, this is
probably one to skip. The end couldn’t make up for the dissatisfaction I
was feeling reading this one.
(NS)
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